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Screenplay: Where the Dreams Live

Genre: Suspense/Supernatural/Ghost

Pages: 113

Logline:

Through his dreams and supernatural guidance, an obligation shy loser suddenly amasses wealth that changes him into a man he is not but he soon finds himself tested when a revengeful stranger needs him to make a commitment or face certain ruin.

The feature screenplay "Where the Dreams Live" is completed and available. WGA Registered: 145619.

" Where the Dreams Live", was one of the 377 Quarterfinalists out of 3541 entries at the Scriptapalooza Competition 2010.

Script Savvy’s feedback, May 2007:

Title: Where the Dreams Live

The concept of combining gambling with the supernatural is intriguing. And the story took off pretty well within the first 10 pages. Nice job of avoiding overly expository dialogue for the most part.

Many of the scenes with the girl were genuinely creepy.

Feedback is the combined scores and remarks from 2 judges.
On a scale of 1-10, 1= poor, 10= excellent.

Originality = 8

The pairing of these two concepts, gambling and the supernatural is very original. Also, the fact that Samuel failed to get the girl, or in fact, anything else, was particularly interesting and really made this story unique.